tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37668803.post6070115435951771545..comments2023-08-01T18:15:55.859+08:00Comments on 人算天算: 極短篇小說:小明返教會(3)Ebenezerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07613587789395091487noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37668803.post-5450592773626122472012-03-05T12:17:59.231+08:002012-03-05T12:17:59.231+08:00五珍 (Jan Ng):
打算下一篇完結喇。五珍 (Jan Ng):<br /><br />打算下一篇完結喇。Ebenezerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07613587789395091487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37668803.post-87258700163001127432012-03-05T12:17:10.487+08:002012-03-05T12:17:10.487+08:00macy:
請看下回分解^^macy:<br /><br />請看下回分解^^Ebenezerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07613587789395091487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37668803.post-8317115211290154332012-03-05T12:03:13.594+08:002012-03-05T12:03:13.594+08:00嘿嘿:
坦白說,你不覺得內容有點悶嗎?我覺得今次因為好想儘量保持真實性,所以內容好被限定,沒辨法好...嘿嘿:<br /><br />坦白說,你不覺得內容有點悶嗎?我覺得今次因為好想儘量保持真實性,所以內容好被限定,沒辨法好奇情,所以我都寫得有點悶。<br /><br />DeepC那邊我可以留言,沒甚麼問題的啊!Ebenezerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07613587789395091487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37668803.post-24887258318141150392012-03-05T11:55:34.387+08:002012-03-05T11:55:34.387+08:00馬沙:
哈哈,我嘅習慣係,放假反而少寫仆^^馬沙:<br /><br />哈哈,我嘅習慣係,放假反而少寫仆^^Ebenezerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07613587789395091487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37668803.post-23234565053512939052012-03-05T11:54:38.709+08:002012-03-05T11:54:38.709+08:00l.minor:
因為...我唔夠墨水吖嘛。l.minor:<br /><br />因為...我唔夠墨水吖嘛。Ebenezerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07613587789395091487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37668803.post-3094685730843664122012-03-05T11:53:24.677+08:002012-03-05T11:53:24.677+08:00Cat:
我呢個故事,係由幾間教會發生過嘅野穿插而寫成,好唔好彩,佢地都係有d名氣嘅大教會。Cat:<br /><br />我呢個故事,係由幾間教會發生過嘅野穿插而寫成,好唔好彩,佢地都係有d名氣嘅大教會。Ebenezerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07613587789395091487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37668803.post-5956441002060591552012-03-05T11:51:20.750+08:002012-03-05T11:51:20.750+08:00naruto:
嗱,係唔係真係冇呃你呢?naruto:<br /><br />嗱,係唔係真係冇呃你呢?Ebenezerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07613587789395091487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37668803.post-15539164845930108792012-03-05T11:50:22.505+08:002012-03-05T11:50:22.505+08:00laulong:
借咗錢走佬我就見過,大耳窿在故會界比較少見喎。laulong:<br /><br />借咗錢走佬我就見過,大耳窿在故會界比較少見喎。Ebenezerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07613587789395091487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37668803.post-81514898163945976062012-03-05T11:48:34.406+08:002012-03-05T11:48:34.406+08:00卡臣:
同你d故事比,我寫呢d料點可以叫奇情呀?卡臣:<br /><br />同你d故事比,我寫呢d料點可以叫奇情呀?Ebenezerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07613587789395091487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37668803.post-77334617695509040162012-03-05T11:43:59.389+08:002012-03-05T11:43:59.389+08:00the inner space:
哈哈,原來你嘅想像力都幾好喎^^the inner space:<br /><br />哈哈,原來你嘅想像力都幾好喎^^Ebenezerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07613587789395091487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37668803.post-43717990939559276712012-03-05T11:11:11.685+08:002012-03-05T11:11:11.685+08:00好緊張喎,仲有幾多篇呢?好緊張喎,仲有幾多篇呢?五珍https://www.blogger.com/profile/16607991517537915635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37668803.post-76571735520519828462012-03-04T23:00:11.788+08:002012-03-04T23:00:11.788+08:00Ebenezer
然後呢?Ebenezer<br /><br />然後呢?macyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09383765165460399429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37668803.post-91360975432349167792012-03-04T02:30:54.244+08:002012-03-04T02:30:54.244+08:00什么极短篇啦,骗人的,写了三篇还没完没了,又卖关子…… 急死人嘞!
奔兄,DeepC那儿您能留言...什么极短篇啦,骗人的,写了三篇还没完没了,又卖关子…… 急死人嘞!<br /><br /><br />奔兄,DeepC那儿您能留言吗?我留不到哦!嘿嘿https://www.blogger.com/profile/16445853975166319994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37668803.post-42823930810977239822012-03-04T02:24:20.849+08:002012-03-04T02:24:20.849+08:00太短啦,放假寫長D啦....太短啦,放假寫長D啦....馬沙https://www.blogger.com/profile/03792393638658031926noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37668803.post-8165485315679389572012-03-03T08:54:21.645+08:002012-03-03T08:54:21.645+08:00篇篇咁短,引死人咩?篇篇咁短,引死人咩?l.minorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12622100072236105698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37668803.post-28418603536615278272012-03-03T00:36:51.334+08:002012-03-03T00:36:51.334+08:00小明返咗"邪教"會?小明返咗"邪教"會?Cathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11358980456767888792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37668803.post-61259424027403653692012-03-03T00:11:55.734+08:002012-03-03T00:11:55.734+08:00真係極短篇呀下真係極短篇呀下narutohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10609310867616488758noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37668803.post-11800558336381621912012-03-02T23:32:13.634+08:002012-03-02T23:32:13.634+08:00見過人輸到PK, 咁有冇人大耳窿?見過人輸到PK, 咁有冇人大耳窿?L Lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09137837623410300427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37668803.post-56304322355367724672012-03-02T21:23:36.424+08:002012-03-02T21:23:36.424+08:00故事越來越奇情,有無賣淫同高買?故事越來越奇情,有無賣淫同高買?卡臣https://www.blogger.com/profile/07721247414470395559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37668803.post-79955795306008324582012-03-02T19:41:40.730+08:002012-03-02T19:41:40.730+08:00》小明今年十六歲,品性善良,一向都是家中的乖乖仔。
》》這個小小的圈子中,竟然會有投資專家教曉他長...》小明今年十六歲,品性善良,一向都是家中的乖乖仔。<br /><br />》》這個小小的圈子中,竟然會有投資專家教曉他長遠必賺的「平均投資法」使他明瞭及早買保險和基金的重要性使小明穫益良多。<br /><br /><br />仲未講到十六歲的小明點去應用「平均投資法」去溝女,又明瞭「保險的重要性」識用安全套播!the inner spacehttp://mindnecessity.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37668803.post-83890746657186255552012-03-02T18:52:33.321+08:002012-03-02T18:52:33.321+08:00eric:
在教會氹人"投資"算唔算開賭?係嘅話,我又真係見過人輸到PK喎!eric:<br /><br />在教會氹人"投資"算唔算開賭?係嘅話,我又真係見過人輸到PK喎!Ebenezerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07613587789395091487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37668803.post-22757059044493596332012-03-02T18:29:31.259+08:002012-03-02T18:29:31.259+08:00嘩如果下集有聚賭,就真喺黃賭毒都齊哂。
我覺得好似有人有心攪攪震。嘩如果下集有聚賭,就真喺黃賭毒都齊哂。<br />我覺得好似有人有心攪攪震。erichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05250737581315104602noreply@blogger.com